ABOUT PETS

When I was three years old, I love to play with cats. The cat could catch the ball that I threw. They were so lovely and cute that I couldn’t leave them. Therefore, I asked my mom to keep the cat. To my delight, Mom agreed.

The next day, I went to the park and took them home. They were happy to come with me. But I didn’t know what terrible things would happen. I went to the living room, and couldn’t believe that the sofa was a mess, and the lamp was overturned. There was trash everywhere, For the experience, I will not keep pets anymore Keeping pets is only tiring but also makes my house dirty. In other words, I don’t want to get into trouble anymore.

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2 Responses to “ABOUT PETS”

Oh~You are a cute girl!

jessie150008 - December 7, 2007 at 3:04 pm
“Keeping pets is “not” only tiring but also makes my house dirty.”
It this what you were trying to say?
The wording is overall good thought there are some small mistakes.
What intrigues me is that at first you love cats. But in the end, you don’t want to get into trouble anymore. I think you can be more specific in describing the change in mind.
Keep going !

younghogan - December 10, 2007 at 1:44 am